55 Fiction

Ok, I decided to post some possible 55 fictions here so you guys can tell me which one you like the most :)

True Enemy

His hands were stained with blood. He had done it. Never had he thought that this day would come, he had stabbed his one true enemy. The 25 years of enmity has finally ended. Archie laughed weakly as he fell, grip on the dagger weakening. The 25 year-old lay motionless.

Reunion

Dennis kneeled before the grave of his late father- his last kin. His tears landed on the final resting place of his deceased relative as he cried himself to sleep the blanket of snow. He felt a tap on his shoulder. Dennis woke up and followed the figure to a reunion dinner unseen on Earth.

I know that its:

1) Fail

2) Too much death

But I hope you can comment and not just post on the tagboard